Friday, June 12, 2009

55:-> I am hooked :D

Where have I seen her before, he thought as she passed by him

He kept staring at her almost amazed by her beauty

But I have met her once but where, he kept digging up his memory

He then saw the girl approach him





"'The beating you got last year wasn't enough, eh?"

17 comments:

  1. LoLz !! did u really get a beating ??

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  2. Awesome!!! But a more grammatically apt last line would be - 'the beating you got last year wasn't enough, eh?' (2 words bhi save ho gaye :P)

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  3. hehe Anurag, ur 55-fictions are one of those posts that i can read quickly on a hectic day and it always leave me refreshed. hehe funny this was... tc!

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  4. haha! Bechara... But I bet many guys can relate to it :P

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  5. @ Pretty me

    Haha! This is fiction girl ...I hope I never do though :D

    @ Ki

    Thanxs ki ...Made the necessary change :)

    @ Warmsunshine

    That's what I always try to do ..keep it as short as possible...and plus when it's 55 fiction it becomes easier :)
    I am glad I could make u smile :)

    @ R.V

    Yeah ..Many would do ...yes ...And hence I wrote it :P

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  6. Aye haye.. jhoot mat bolna ki yea fiction hai!

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  7. nt fair man...u posting ur real life stories under 55 fiction label....hahaha

    only i knw the truth man....god never knew u wre so much so inspired by tht incident that u decide to write abt it hehehehe

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  8. aree, shes the gal who gave u rose on roseday, remember?

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  9. ROFL @ Express ka comment :D
    Yeah, is it that girl? :D
    Woman-beater :O
    I can sue you for this post :X

    Nice one :P

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  10. @ Crystal

    Fiction hain yaar...Mujhe kaun ladki maregii :D

    @ The Solitary Writer

    Stephen Saale....Kuch bhi phek mat...No such incident took place and you know that ..Nice try btw :D

    @ Quirky Mon

    Thanxs girl :)

    @ Apparently intellectual

    Thanxs and welcome to my blog :)

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  11. @ Chriz

    :D

    @ Riya

    Thanxs and welcome back :)

    @ Express

    Nice try....May be better than stephen but like the latter this one too didn't work :P
    No Girl beats me up u know ....I am such a nice guy :D ;)

    @ Mads

    Lol....Naa...As I said
    THIS IS FICTION :D ..
    Damn how many times will I hv to write it :X ....
    Thanxs Anyways Mads :P

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Go Onn ..... Do it !!!!!