Where have I seen her before, he thought as she passed by him
He kept staring at her almost amazed by her beauty
But I have met her once but where, he kept digging up his memory
He then saw the girl approach him
"'The beating you got last year wasn't enough, eh?"
LoLz !! did u really get a beating ??
ReplyDeleteAwesome!!! But a more grammatically apt last line would be - 'the beating you got last year wasn't enough, eh?' (2 words bhi save ho gaye :P)
ReplyDeletehehe Anurag, ur 55-fictions are one of those posts that i can read quickly on a hectic day and it always leave me refreshed. hehe funny this was... tc!
ReplyDeletehaha! Bechara... But I bet many guys can relate to it :P
ReplyDelete@ Pretty me
ReplyDeleteHaha! This is fiction girl ...I hope I never do though :D
@ Ki
Thanxs ki ...Made the necessary change :)
@ Warmsunshine
That's what I always try to do ..keep it as short as possible...and plus when it's 55 fiction it becomes easier :)
I am glad I could make u smile :)
@ R.V
Yeah ..Many would do ...yes ...And hence I wrote it :P
Aye haye.. jhoot mat bolna ki yea fiction hai!
ReplyDeletent fair man...u posting ur real life stories under 55 fiction label....hahaha
ReplyDeleteonly i knw the truth man....god never knew u wre so much so inspired by tht incident that u decide to write abt it hehehehe
This is good. Lol :)
ReplyDeletehehe..nicE!!
ReplyDeletehehe :)
ReplyDeletehe he.. lol.. funny one.!!
ReplyDeletearee, shes the gal who gave u rose on roseday, remember?
ReplyDeleteROFL @ Express ka comment :D
ReplyDeleteYeah, is it that girl? :D
Woman-beater :O
I can sue you for this post :X
Nice one :P
@ Crystal
ReplyDeleteFiction hain yaar...Mujhe kaun ladki maregii :D
@ The Solitary Writer
Stephen Saale....Kuch bhi phek mat...No such incident took place and you know that ..Nice try btw :D
@ Quirky Mon
Thanxs girl :)
@ Apparently intellectual
Thanxs and welcome to my blog :)
@ Chriz
ReplyDelete:D
@ Riya
Thanxs and welcome back :)
@ Express
Nice try....May be better than stephen but like the latter this one too didn't work :P
No Girl beats me up u know ....I am such a nice guy :D ;)
@ Mads
Lol....Naa...As I said
THIS IS FICTION :D ..
Damn how many times will I hv to write it :X ....
Thanxs Anyways Mads :P
Mai kyo hoon?
ReplyDeletePersonal experience kya?! ;)
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