This one's a short story I wrote for the Ascension" Short Fiction Contest in Clarity of Night"
I could not participate in the contest sadly as the date of submitting the story expired.But hey I still wrote something :P. The idea of the contest was to see a pic and write a short story having the pic in mind. I came up with this :)
This was the pic
I was in the escalator when I saw her. I was going down and she was coming up. She looked really Familiar. Our Eyes finally met. She gave a smile. So I did know her after all. But who was she? School, College….Damn! I had a pretty bad memory. She kept on looking at me till I reached the ground floor. Gosh! Whoever she was, she was damn pretty.
As I was about to turn and go back home, almost cursing my bad memory, I suddenly saw her rush to take the escalator, the one which I had taken seconds ago. She definitely knows me I thought. A few paces and she would be near me and damn I don’t even have a good deo on :P As she came a meter close……. ....
Somebody shouted from behind in an extremely girly way…………..
Hiiiiiiiiii Purva….Such a looong time naaa!!!!
What the …….?
I had made a complete fool of myself.
hehehe.. this one .. lot of people are taking this.. yours was hehehe...
ReplyDeleteAhem..lmao..
ReplyDeletebut was this just for plain fun?
I know you can do better! :)O
@ Chriz
ReplyDeleteI know...I have read most of them.I am glad you found my version funny :P
@ Crystal zee
I guess it was yeah ...Most of the other posts that I had read for the contest were kinda same.Why not have a funny angle to it too? eh?
I prolly wouldn't have come up with a "lmao" version if I had written something else.Probably next time girl :) ... Promisshh :P
LOL
ReplyDeleteThis was refreshing and cute :)
hehehehe! lol!
ReplyDelete:D
mwhahahaha
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hehe... Happens a lot of times with me, don't know whether I am cock eyed, or the callers are... ;)
ReplyDelete@ Warmsunshine,Bhai and Divinediu
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
@Akansha
Well yeah it happens when u r cock-eyed...it's Basically U and not the caller who is at "Fault" and made to look stupid :P
haha... happens to me alot of times... i go all crazy and go dhappa only to realise its not the person i was thinking the person to be...
ReplyDeletemere saath toh aksar hota hai! :P
ReplyDeletehehe nice one.. :)
ReplyDeletehope it is just friction though
@ Swayam
ReplyDeleteDhappa ..lol dat's the first ..haha ...Dat must hv really embaraasing ....ppl would hv said ...wtf ??...lol :D
@ Trinaa...
Haan kya .. :P
@ Ani
Hehe....no Ani it's not and I better hope it won't be in the future :)
@ Ani ...Oops Sorry... Yes it is fiction... lol....And I hope it remains a fiction :D
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